Writers Sin

Writers Sin

A Poem by Tenten

 

 
you call this love real
you call this love faithful
but I’m the sinner of lovers lust
 you feel my heat
 you fell to my knees
 
this sin this life this lie
you called it your truth
to find some form of safety
in its dying hands
then turned to dust
in an ashes to ashes method
lacking the physical death
 
breaking hearts and minds
tearing bodies anew
for the safety to collapse
and those wonderings eyes
left to questions
did you love did you care
did it matter
that time spent
leaving the broken souls to despair
 
you saw your lies
you wrote your trust
your version of wrongs and rights
the writers sin
the writers life
the creation birth in b*****d hands
you called it love
you called right
you called it holy
in a way that never met divinity
 
in the end you set to flame
past and future possibility
raise higher rise higher
consuming the child
burning the mother
leaving the title the tale of only a wicked father
 
this is your gift
this is you proof of sin
that as man we deny
that as man we pretend does not exist
this is your proof
that the dreams and the nightmares
took to reality
before your potency came to life
this is your proof
this our undeniable lie
 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 10:48AM Fri 05/23/08 'Remember the Name' Fort Minor going with the music�s flow, mind just going, on the brink of madness or insanity something, that un-nameable something (Typed, House)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This has a strong sense and rhythm.
Like it catches your mind until you've read it many times,
and take every line as serious as the last.
I loke it, a lot.

Posted 16 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

88 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on September 8, 2008

Author

Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



About
I know me well enough to know that I don't who I truly am and that I deceive myself into believing i have found my way in life. i well away of the fact that i am a contradiction of actions and words a.. more..

Writing
Back Pocket Back Pocket

A Poem by Tenten


Ten Feet Ten Feet

A Poem by Tenten


Intermission Intermission

A Poem by Tenten