Gone

Gone

A Poem by Tenten

 

Mother, this woman who bore me
Brother, that man I knew momentarily
I'm leaving now
It'll be a whisper
Then you're eyes will notice
The shadow form
Is gone from sight
I've been invisible to you
For far too long
These days
Without my anger, my hatred
The pain seems to linger
Outside of the distractions
Known as music and word
So I'm leaving now
Through my window
You'll not notice my departure
Small gifts
Mother, Brother I'm gone
And you move on
Easier than these eyes
 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 8:07AM Mon 06/02/08 'Explain' Paramour lonely, alone, sad, tired emotionally, used (Typed, House)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Oh, honey!! How utterly sad.... tragic really. But in it lies your strength... your wishes to surround yourself with those that may appreciate you instead of suffocating in the shadow of those who do not.
It is their loss, and I feel worse for them than you.... as you've got your freedom... and they'll be missing out on a wonderful woman. Excellent piece.

Of course if it is fiction....it's still an excellent piece!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

86 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on August 30, 2008

Author

Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



About
I know me well enough to know that I don't who I truly am and that I deceive myself into believing i have found my way in life. i well away of the fact that i am a contradiction of actions and words a.. more..

Writing
Back Pocket Back Pocket

A Poem by Tenten


Ten Feet Ten Feet

A Poem by Tenten


Intermission Intermission

A Poem by Tenten





Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5
Compartment 114
Compartment 114