sPin, Turn, drOp

sPin, Turn, drOp

A Poem by Tenten

 

Spin,
          Turn,
                   Drop...
Lift you're head up
   Meet these eyes
      Smile on your face
Make me fall in love
   Create devotion in a stranger
      Inspire need in nameless faces
Clear your words
          Convince with lies
                   Start over again
Spin,
          Turn,
                   Drop,
Getting better
          Not there
                   Yet

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 9:24AM Su 06/15/08 'Lalala' Se7en going to the song, no real point, ok-here (Typed, Prides)

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TLK
There's a real sense of rhythm here.

However, the typo of "you're" jarred a bit.



Posted 12 Years Ago



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Tenten
Tenten

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