Act Of Love

Act Of Love

A Poem by Tenten

 

Perform for me
this Act of Love
In gentle hold
Subtle brush of lips
This farce of togetherness
Slow to move
In the romance direction
Of my mouth to your skin
Your breath to my thighs
this Act of Love
A game we play

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 2:40AM Tue 0718 NM fine, getting comfortable, try to be solid, (Written, Sylph)

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I loved the poem. You want might to change the font, though. It was distracting.
Vivid and honest writing.


Posted 16 Years Ago


In the world that is, I suppose there would be an act of love that is a farce. I like the flow of this and how it all comes down to the great game that people play. It makes a take a moment to question love and it's sincerity.
It questions our mentality that the human race places physical intamace in the realm of love, while I think it should be seperate.

Great Write!
Aaron Maycroft

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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