when did you stop loving

when did you stop loving

A Poem by Tenten

 


When I stopped being your ‘little girl’

Is that when you stopped loving me

When I decided paint and canvas

Are equal to pen and paper

Is that when your care halted

When I decided color holds beauty just as two words

Is that when you decided am not worth it

Because every time your eyes meet mind

They keep looking through

                Seeing nothing close to you

                I am dismissed

 

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 12:30PM Sun 10/??/07 AFI Bunnies Sad Alone Hurt Expressing, Tears (Written, Lenore)

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Added on February 27, 2008

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Tenten
Tenten

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