This is Beauty

This is Beauty

A Poem by Tenten
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written for my new baby Elyse who was born two weeks ago, her mother and father are blessed.

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This is beauty

Sleeping peacefully at the moment

This is innocence

Born of love and trust

This is the new one

Created by honor and respect

This is a smile

Birthed into reality

 

She is creation

She is something more

Than any words can express

This is the new child

Brought into a mixed up family

Of blood ties and friends

Hugs and smiles

 

So this is greatness

Coming from a

Woman and a man

This life

Beyond the talk and food cravings

Past the science and religion

This is beauty


© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 9:29PM Sat 02/09/08 NM Writing for Baby Elyse, inspired, honest sweet smile, good breathe (Typed)

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Simplicity to the core. Any mother would be willing to say this is their baby you write of but ....is it yours? or a neice? who is this poem dedicated to...Baby Elyse must be a special baby to you all. Good luck. cheers, lea

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awwwwwwwwwwwww. Congratulations!!! How wonderful this piece is...it makes me start to rethink my idea about NO KIDS again! This is a wonderful splendid place to be and letting us into this magical realm was such a generous thing to do!!! Much love to you and yours!!!! I'm all tingly! : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww... thats so sweet... That child is very blessed to have family that cares so much... Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Tenten
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