Always and ForeverA Poem by CraigI love you, Sweet Baby, for fulfilling my dreams.
You set my heart a blaze with passion and love. I am grateful for you, and I thank the lord above for sending me his best, a woman of sheer perfection. You have given me your love and unconditional affection. Like a rose in moist earth, our love will flourish and grow. You're like an Angel on Earth with a radiant glow. Like a dove in flight, our love will soar. I will love you Sweet Princess, forevermore. Thank you for brightening my skies and calming my seas. I love you, Sweet Baby, for fulfilling my dreams. |
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Ohh another good one.. you have such flow and a feeling of unforced rhythme.. sounds like straight from the heart and is perfect.. your princess is a very lucky girl to have someone with so much passion in writing!!! =)
Posted 15 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
It was a beautiful poem. I had great flow amazing rhyming. We had to write a poem in class on Thursday based off a poem we read, and the poem rhymed, so I tried to make every other line rhyme. I didn't really woork out too well, but I ended up liking the poem. Again nice rhyming! I love your work!
Posted 15 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
This is so pretty! Whoever you are writing about is very very lucky! Good job :)
Posted 15 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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Added on March 3, 2009
4 Reviews
Added on March 3, 2009
Author
Craig
Nashville, TN
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