Tender ecstasy - Breathless

I am breathless thinking of you. Breathless when I am with you my love. We are inches apart and I feel your sweet breath on my lips. Stay close my darling, so I can take into me, the air you breathe. Ordinary air enters your lungs and comes out hot and sweet. I can taste you're sweetness on my lips. It lures me to you, like a bee to sweet honey.

 

I slowly move closer. I finally take you into me. We share the wetness of our mouths with a passionate kiss. Exploding passion sets my soul on fire, as we two, become one. I breathe you; I taste you, yet I still want more. All that you are hungers' me for you. I want all that you are, all the beauty, warmth and passion inside of you.

 

You have awakened my spirit. I yearn for the moment when you are in my arms again. I need to kiss you, touch you, and hold your body close to mine. I yearn for the moment when our bodies are intertwined in tender ecstasy and we share all that we are, for only then will I be able to breathe again.

 

 

 

 

My Love, I am breathless.

Reviews

[Nader!!]

The first part is a little redundant, but overall very sensual and highly descriptive
I enjoyed it very much thank you, :)

[emmajoy]

Passion and romance in one wonderful parcel.. and, written very sensitively and subtly in a quite brief poem. It's a lovely piece of writing..

[octane143]

Wow. That was beautiful! Makes a girl sigh and want to melt. To have a lover think these wonderful things and be able to mold them into such a moving display of love is amazing. It's erotic in a loving sense of the worls. It's not lust but love. Very well done!