IN A WINDED WAKE

IN A WINDED WAKE

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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A poem that the wind whispered to me as I walked...

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In a

winded
wake

did I

thus
walk
listening

to its

autumn

whispers.
And how

I saw
the breeze
carry leaves
chips of this
scraps of that
fragments
of feelings
lifted on
invisible wings.
Then

I knew
and oh

how I

whispered
your name
on the winds
letting it
carry

my words

over worlds.
In the chill

of morning
or the

season’s

scent

of evening
listen
oh listen
and you’ll hear
my voice
calling.
Feel my
warm breath
brushing over

your cheek
as the wind
carries me

over valleys

mountains

deserts

oceans

to you.

© 2011 An owl on the moon


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Nice work, man. You are good at this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So dreamy and such beauty held in this piece...

** Oh listen and you'll hear my voice calling.
feel my warm breath brushing over your cheek
as the wind carries me over valleys, mountains, deserts
oceans to you ** Craig Froman

I love that!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


So beautiful, this is a very calming piece, absolutely beautiful!!!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


How that poetic pen brushed against the imaginary parchment paper rustling like the winds and sending the words scattering in the frenzied breeze created by the rushing thoughts of a very skilled man of words. You have not lost the midas touch, these words are golden.

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh! i am always so rewarded when I read your work. This is a tad different than your usual style and I love it. It reminds me of a poem I wrote about the snow. I appreciate the thoughts and feelings that went into this piece and I applaud your experimentation. it is still just as wonderful as your other poetry, but with an added zing. ha! I am such a fan of yours. it was good to read you- it has been a while.

Posted 13 Years Ago


As usual, your work is magnificence itself. My favorite lines were
"Then/I knew/and oh/how I/whispered/your name/on the winds/letting it /carry/my words/over worlds."
It's always an enchanting thought to imagine one can see their words traversing the winds, going wherever the air wills, a testament of our thoughts and desires.

Posted 13 Years Ago


OUTSTANDING!!! Instant Favorite!!

100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


So pure and full of romance. Longing aspects, over the oceans, to be together through the wind, I love the concept very much of this poem. It's symbolic, and written with a great imagery, Very excellent my friend, and I love the picture too! such a gothic, occult, woman, in all of mother natures beauty~

Posted 13 Years Ago


A warm fall kiss is what this reminded me off. Gorgeous!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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so romantic..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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