As if dust were diamonds

 

 

 

 

Breathing,

air running circles

around you…

And my eyes

catching fireflies

in slowing motion…

Emerald emotions

caress my memory,

piecing me into you

fragment by fragment…

Webs laced in liquid

filling in the spaces;

hollowed time

where there had been

only gray empty…

And you come

stand in my mind,

changing everything

as if dust were diamonds…

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Wow, this is so beautiful. As I am reading your poem, I see it unravel in my mind. Wow, to find someone to love in such a way.
"And you come
stand in my mind,
changing everything
as if dust were diamonds…"
I love this!

[Tina Kline]

This is very beautiful and such a wonderfully uplifting poem. I really enjoyed reading this!

[Helen Woodward]

And it is diamonds when feelings as deep as those you have phrased are involved. A romantic piece akin to the best I have read, you have a soft approach on the path that leads to your heart Craig.
How beautiful your words and passionate your soul...

Blesssssssssssssss

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very beautiful and romantic...very outstanding. Your words are like magic and the spells they were are your poems and are truly wonderful!

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and ever so lovely!
I really enjoyed the beauty in this wonderful piece.

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Craig..as always you turn the words on the page into something hauntingly beautiful...wouldn't that be lovely dust as precious as diamonds..I would be rich just cleaning the house!!

[Pebbles]

you write so beautifully and i love the format youve used here it really fits the words well :)

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Such a beautiful piece. You capture the emotions perfectly with the grace of thousands of happy souls. Such vivid sensations that come across the reader as they read line by line. Another masterpiece my friend. Beautiful.

[Shalini Dinesh]

the love poems you write are very touching realistic and lingering into mind with deep emotions, i initially opened this poem as its title captivated me, if only dusts were really diamonds every woman's room will be full of dust..... lovely poem.