"Now I take her into me
share my book with her
until we know
can read each glance
each whisper
each touch…"
Poetical Prowess!!! This was fantastic! From the subtle flow to the image at the beginning to set the mood of the piece....you crafted an intelligently phrased piece. The type so delicately thought of that i cannot help but be enthralled in the book (pun intended) :)
Simply beautiful, a poem so filled with love and joy. She seems a rare and amazing book for sure, from cover to cover nothing could be more perfect. Maybe this is where the phrase, "Curl up with a good book" came from? Wondrously gorgeous
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
I so deeply appreciate your words. And yes, she is a very rare and amazing book. One day perhaps I c.. read moreI so deeply appreciate your words. And yes, she is a very rare and amazing book. One day perhaps I can curl up with her. A very happy weekend to you, dear poet. :)
This is romanticism at its best. I don't know why, but I felt a bittersweet ache in my heart after reading this. Something about the words ... something about the way you wrote them ... something about this whole piece ...
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Your words and flowing thoughts are so appreciated, Sally. And you sensed it so well. There is a bit.. read moreYour words and flowing thoughts are so appreciated, Sally. And you sensed it so well. There is a bittersweet taste to love and beauty, for it reflects so much of us and the empty places that we long to have filled with its presence... page by page.
Usually, I am not captivated by love poetry or songs, but this piece just does something that few other love poems on this website do. Creativity not only spreads its wings in this piece, but also soars gracefully through a hypnotizing sky of unbridled emotion, thought, flow and passion. I have read many fantastic poems on this website, and this piece has easily earned a place amongst my absolute favorites of those pieces! I saw the view count when I was reading, and spilled metaphorical coffee on myself lol. I can tell that every one of those views was deserved. Phenomenal performance, my fellow writer! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
How I so appreciate your lifting words! Thank you! I have a metaphorical paper towel if you need it... read moreHow I so appreciate your lifting words! Thank you! I have a metaphorical paper towel if you need it. Looking forward to reading your soul words. :)
This is the perfect way to express getting to know someone and falling in love with them! The person who you spend the rest of your life with should be the best book you have ever been able to "read", and you should be able to read it without looking! So intimate and beautiful can't help but getting the chills. Love it, one of my new favorites.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind, uplifting words! May we all find a love like that. :)
To read this quickly would be a crime to a beautiful muse. Poems like this are meant to be savored like a wine from the finest vintage, the taste rolls across the palate and the whole sensory system succumbs. so beautiful!! Superb writing!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
It's an honor to have you stop by my page. Thank you so very much. :)
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
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