"Now I take her into me
share my book with her
until we know
can read each glance
each whisper
each touch…"
Poetical Prowess!!! This was fantastic! From the subtle flow to the image at the beginning to set the mood of the piece....you crafted an intelligently phrased piece. The type so delicately thought of that i cannot help but be enthralled in the book (pun intended) :)
What a lovely poem! Every line is gorgeously crafted with an eclectic feel. The imagery in this poem flows through every word. I truly enjoyed reading this! Job well done.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
So very thankful you came here to read my poetry. Thank you so much!
Breathtakingly beautiful!
There is so much depth and layers of emotion involved, kind of touches the reader like a fresh breeze.
Liked this masterpiece!
Well done, Craig!
Longtime! How have you been?
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you, dear Jyoti! I always appreciate your kindness. I am doing well... or learning to... it is.. read moreThank you, dear Jyoti! I always appreciate your kindness. I am doing well... or learning to... it is such a wondrous world. How are you, my precious friend? :)
What can I say.
This is definetly swoon-worthy.
I'd imagine any woman deserves to be read like a book.
With all the depth and desire to understand accompnied by that analogy.
This seems to be an older bit, written several years ago.
But it is pretty darn good, which makes me wonder how far has your skill trajectory gone since.
I like good poems, but I am really more of a story guy. Would love to see one of yours.
Keep up the good work my friend.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you my friend! Always good to hear from you and see your insights. It is something to seek in .. read moreThank you my friend! Always good to hear from you and see your insights. It is something to seek in life... one who will read you like a book... and love to turn your pages.
An example of one long metaphor. Filled with plenty of imagery and feels intensely intimate. The tone is almost like a whisper - at least in my mind. Beautiful work!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Tessa! So hope your new week is filled with inspiration. :)
Beautifully expressed. Although modern ideas rooted in sensory, it also rings of Toltec wisdom.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your presence here, AB. “How can I know you if I don't know myself?” ― Lujan Mat.. read moreThank you for your presence here, AB. “How can I know you if I don't know myself?” ― Lujan Matus, Whisperings of the Dragon
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..