"Now I take her into me
share my book with her
until we know
can read each glance
each whisper
each touch…"
Poetical Prowess!!! This was fantastic! From the subtle flow to the image at the beginning to set the mood of the piece....you crafted an intelligently phrased piece. The type so delicately thought of that i cannot help but be enthralled in the book (pun intended) :)
One of my favorites by you! "And I read with such abandon across her pages My fingers trailing her paper soft skin" favorite line not only romantic but very delicate, sensual, and I loved getting a visual if the parallels of a book's pages and the skin of a body.
Great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
So good to see you by, Meliss@k! Thank you so much!
You are the king of metaphor and imagery in this piece. Yes a woman is a book...her story waiting to be read. She will take you on a journey into the depths of her soul. Better hold on tight..sometimes its a bumpy ride. Lol... brilliant writing!!
These words are so powerful, yet gentle and sensual all at the same time. The beauty of one's mind, wrapped into a book... Gorgeous metaphor, built impeccably.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Dearest friend! Thank you for sharing your sweet time here. You have been my friend for years, and .. read moreDearest friend! Thank you for sharing your sweet time here. You have been my friend for years, and that means so much. Your book is exquisite to me. :)
You've exquisitely combined the sensual with the sexual with the soulful.
My only comment is that the "scent of vanilla" seems a little out of the blue, and unrelated to the rest of the wonderful poem.
A beautiful read.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
So pleased that you came by! Thank you, dear friend.. and that you are. :)
This is such a beautiful and amazing tribute to a woman. One of the best I ever came across! Your pen creates such magical visions!
"In her sighs
she speaks of
stories and sonnets
history and fantasy" - priceless poetry here!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Always pure joy to have you by, Divya! I truly do long to read your book... even the index in the b.. read moreAlways pure joy to have you by, Divya! I truly do long to read your book... even the index in the back! :)
What an amazing write. Each of us is a book. We are stories. Some are good, some are bad, some sad. But this is brilliant. A romantic poem like no other I've read. Thanks for sharing
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yes, my friend.. and as a poet we all look forward to reading more of your book. :)
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..