I drowned within a chocolate sea...

But what a way to go... :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I drowned within a chocolate sea

and felt the darkness swallow me

feared the worst; thought all was lost

over my mind such memories cross’d

saw sun’s reflection on the waves

tasty sweetness on my lips I craved

then I drank it down to the lastest drop

such sweet revenge; I couldn’t stop

travelled to a mall, a shop, a store

knew I had to have some more

and when my revelry was done

I smiled, though I weighed ‘alf a ton

now happy I am all my days, you see

for I drowned within a chocolate sea…

 

Author's Note

Grab your swimsuit… you won’t need a towel… Hope you're smiling...

Reviews

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MMM! Choclate, Loved this craig, What a yummy write. This is amazing.

[Sukriti Suki]

Smiling a lot.....oh sweet chocolate....you make my days so bearable....I like the honest, simple approach here.....wonderful and chocolaty.

[Helen Woodward]

Yes!! Big time, I have to admit to a chocolate addiction and a sea of it would see me weighing more than a ton Mmmmmmmmmmmmm YUM!!!
Novel idea Craig...mouth watering...

xxxooxxx

[Helen Woodward]

Yes!! Big time, I have to admit to a chocolate addiction and a sea of it would see me weighing more than a ton Mmmmmmmmmmmmm YUM!!!
Novel idea Craig...mouth watering...

xxxooxxx

[Brianna Brie]

Cute! I love everything chocolate. :)

[Ashley]

this was so sweeeeeettttt!!!!!!!!!!!! 100

[Mark]

Well, if one really MUST drown, I can think of but one solitary preferable fluid! With the line, "...and felt the darkness swallow me", I was compelled to ask whether you were in fact talking about chocolate at all, or our too-human tendency to indulge in ANYthing and EVERYthing to excess, to the point where, at first, we are merely bored with it, but then finally, it kills us...needn't have bothered; seems it was about chocolate after all! One thing I have no fear of ever becoming bored with is my man Craig's delicious wit. Well spoken, Master!

[Shellie]

I love this. Need to go get my huge Dairy Milk chocolate bar. the picture is tempting. wish i was willy wonka! lovely poem Craigx

[Sunni Davis]

Definitely smiling! Such a wonderfully whimsical, carefree poem. There's absolutely nothing better than chocolate and youve captured that perfectly.

[Larry Dyson]

;>)