COME ALIVE

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Life runs crimson through seeping scars

A shattered soul ripped by raven lies

Bitter tasting prison with cerulean bars

Screams splinter peaceful night skies…

 

Come alive, come alive and taste the rain

Leave behind your bitterness and pain…

 

Oh you will know the nightmare is over

And your auburn dream has come alive

When you taste the ginger on my fingers

And you look into my sapphire eyes…

 

You’ve come alive, come alive to taste the rain

Left behind your bitterness and pain...

 

 

Author's Note

Life breathes over us in seasons... May you find spring smiling on you this day...

Reviews

[CrochetRie]

Beautifully written & so fluid it rolls of the tongue with ease

[Robert Kahil]

Truly astounding and powerful. One of those works that needs to be read by everyone. I especially love the first stanza. There's so much peace in this after a hard day.

[Klyn]

I danced in the rain...but ran when the lightening came.
Love it!

[Muse]

This was so fluid it could be a song, very moving and a very beautiful write!

[Star Wolf]

Some tragic stories do have happy endings and I'm glad. And I'm glad this one does. A very moving and beautiful poem.

[Tina Kline]

Lots of pain in this but lots of hope too. All is not lost. I think this poem would make great song lyrics.

[Black Cat Fever]

There is hope, even after tragedy. A wonderful hopeful write.

[Siddhartha]

Brims with resolute optimism and undying hope.Is brilliant and feels to me like therapy. Thanks for sharing...

[thoughts of jade]

what a beautiful piece. so full of optimism

[Vitcky Walker]

Great Cme to alive Craig......

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