Laughing at what winter thought was dead

Laughing at what winter thought was dead

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Each blossom is a seed of hope...

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Laughing at what winter thought was dead

Perennial madness in my lifty-lofty head

Tender plants, sprouting their true leaves

Alba flowers and amurensis-sighing sleeves

And your pomegranate lips a musical entice

Cross fields of sage and lavender-white rice

Grafted beauty on floating winds of thyme

You dance like magic on variegated rhyme

And life is laughing, spinning, leaping too

As winter’s sterile promise all fell through!

© 2011 An owl on the moon


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wow...
hilarious....
wonderful song.....
I have no words to express how much I appreciate this poem...
craig, excellent...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Breath-taking! And an artistic choice of the picture and font, made the layout charming, yours words were heart-felt for me :) ... thank you for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is just so lovely and wonderful. I really enjoyed this one Craig, Wonderful rhyme scheme and flow.


Posted 13 Years Ago


this is beautifully written. i love the way you write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This reads so well.. just so smooth and a little playful.
Such a beautiful poem of Springs arrival.. Always a pleasure
reading your words.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderfully penned..I really like this one Craig..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


Grafted beauty on floating winds of thyme
You dance like magic on variegated rhyme

These two lines are beautiful. As were many others, but those two were my favorite. A nice uplifting piece for this time of year!


Posted 13 Years Ago


impeccable meter...this brightens with lively images and beat...spring is glorious and so is this piece...beautiful..

Posted 13 Years Ago


And the cold winds of winter scatter aloft the fields....the fields of sage and lavender-white rice....and the warmth of the winter sun laughs at all!
Such a wonderful expression of sending those days of bleak away.
As always, meter spot-on, delivered with poetic brilliance!
I love your writing, and the image is just lovely!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


You never cease to thrill me. Your poetry it alive and magical. I love "Cross fields of sage and lavender-white rice" ... I love it..x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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