In Weather's Feast

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Flakes of white chocolate drifting

dancing over the landscape lifting…

As the yellow pineapple sun sings

a lilting papaya cloud lullaby brings…

On my warm tongue served fine and cold

vanilla ribbons of icing-cream unfold…

And in the hunger of warmer winds

scents of grilling-stirred breezes move in…

Catching crystal drops of white-wine rain

drip-dropping, never stopping candy canes…

Cinnamon and scarlet spinning swirls release

An orchestra of birdsong in weather’s feast...

Author's Note

Isn't life simply delicious... :)

Reviews

[Bubo]

Wonderful sights and colours, and so many tastes........senses assaulted!Beautiful!!

[Tina Kline]

I really like this, its very clever with the way you made use of the imagery in this. Life sure can be yummy at times! Outstanding write!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Delightful! I'd sure enjoy such a feast on a hot summer evening. I really like this and enjoyed reading it!

[emmajoy]

Methinks you enjoy feasting upon fine foods, Mr. Froman! This is such a delicious banquet of words, each drifting beautifully like a menu of seasons' harvest. Plus, re-reading- it's a clever piece of writing because you've matched the foods to the elements, 'Catching crystal drops of white-wine rain ~ drip-dropping, never stopping candy canes…'

[Valentine]

For many people...yes..for others in this world..no. All I seem to do is pray for this world to become a sweeter place...maybe not chocolate covered..but peacefully covered..Nice one..Kathie

[LA Lorena]

It certainly is, especially when you start with white chocolate! This was delicious and delightful to read.

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Yes life is simply delicious most of the time. This was awesome Craig. Love the imagery I could see my self skipping along that path in the picture, experiencing it all.
Loved this

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

MMMM Such delicious imagery you used, another excellent poem!

[Khaaki]

Amazing craig... this is so yummy!! a delight for every reader... thanks for sharing these wonderful words...

[Gheeneil]

Wow, this is beautiful! That's quite a meal. A very interesting piece! Keep writing.