The sun is jealous

Based on a true story... or so says I...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ì Hush golden sun is jealous of your smile     

Burns muted hot in your warmth for awhile…

 

Ì And wild ocean steals color from your eyes

In your stirring shadows, the blue waves rise…

 

Ì How the whistling wind whispers your name

Haunts deeping forests, dances blossoming plains…

 

Ì Each step you take caressingly skates the earth

Startling stones of fire lust quiver in untamed mirth…

 

Ì Thunderous chants in emotions of earth and isles

Hushed golden sun is so jealous of your smile…

 

Reviews

[?]

well Craig you have done it again. You must be a romantic.
This is so romantic and just flows so easily.
Makes me imagine a man telling this to his woman as she lays there with her eyes closed. gosh
wow great poem
Thanks for sharing with me
Look forward to the next

[Sofea]

I really admire your writing skills. :)

[Mark]

I could be wrong, of course--I frequently am, you know--but this sounds, with it's references to isles, smiles and seas as though you might have had a particular Briton in mind as you composed it.
Whether or no, it is still a beautiful poem, with gentle rhythms and subtle rhymes so indicative of your classical, romantic style. The image of Nature herself stealing her preeminent qualities from this particular lass is breathtaking.

[ali]

I love your use of alliteration. This poem is very romantic (and not just in the sense of love and romance, but also following the tradition of the romantics) and it is also very clever.

[Sarah Jane]

how romantic, its so beautiful the way you've written this, your talented:)

[Mason]

This poem is beautiful. youre ability to write romantically is paramount, seeing another as a beautiful manifestation of nature. very very good.

[*** Hey Jude***]

You have an amazing gift Craig to put words together in a way that is so intoxicating! Without a doubt, you are a wordmaster! Well done, another FAV! ~ Judi ☺♫

[Ladysue]

You write with such graceful beauty. Romantic and enchanting...

[sayandeep kundu]

"Each step you take caressingly skates the earth
Startling stones of fire lust quiver in untamed mirth…"

That's sublime....
so very beautiful, musical and transcendental...:)
Regards~ Sayandeep

[Jeff]

Another great poem. Wonderful imagery.

[Shellie]

awwww god. *sigh* we need to start a Last of the great romantics group. so few of us left. this was lovely xxx