Your song...

Your life is like the most beautiful song I've ever heard...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The song I hear is soft and slow

And then like amber light it grows

 

Reflections of your voiced refrain

Repeating now of crimson stains

 

Forever in silvery symphony

With slides and slurs and harmony

 

And your song a deep rhythm now

Darkly brooding chants that bow

 

So the cadence brings the end

And the interlude in time begins

 

Your life is the most beautiful song

I cling to your music all day long

 

Let me listen to it all my days

And let your song lead my ways...

 

Reviews

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This is a very lovely write in which you have penned.
Your words captivates the soul. I enjoy the picture.

[Robin]

to hear the song in one is to know ...

[Wicahpi]

Just sublime.
What girl wouldn't love this
and swoon to it's melody.

Whomever your muse,
she's got to feel blessed with
this wisp of a romantic quill.

Fabulous & Favorites xx

[Brianna Brie]

This is so gentle. Nicely written. Love the metaphor!

[Lydia Blackwell]

this is very beautiful!
I like this line:

With slides and slurs and harmony

for some reason, it is particularly pleasing. what a wonderful way to think of someone's life- as a song. we all have our own, uniquely ours, sung in our own way. How precious of you to notice these things. It is what makes a good poet. Great work, Craig!

[Vivek Koshy]

Sweet.

[darem aq.]

Your writings contain an overdose of hope and honesty ! Well done my friend, this piece brings so much hope and light to my heart

[Ang]

Brought a smile to my face! I love how peaceful this poem is and how effortlessly you flow through the piece. Great poem! :)

[Ladysue]

oh very romantic and so endearingly radiate... beautiful...