Your song...

Your life is like the most beautiful song I've ever heard...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The song I hear is soft and slow

And then like amber light it grows

 

Reflections of your voiced refrain

Repeating now of crimson stains

 

Forever in silvery symphony

With slides and slurs and harmony

 

And your song a deep rhythm now

Darkly brooding chants that bow

 

So the cadence brings the end

And the interlude in time begins

 

Your life is the most beautiful song

I cling to your music all day long

 

Let me listen to it all my days

And let your song lead my ways...

 

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

A very good story

[nostal]

Very beautiful:i have an impulse to break it in merry singing.

[Alz Alz]

I'm a successful musician and I LOVE this poem! 10/10:
Favorite stanza:
"Forever in silvery symphony
With slides and slurs and harmony"

[Dana Kathryn]

Well,another Beautiful poem!! I love the pic as well,it go's with this colorful poetry well!


Dana-

[Seashell]

I simply adore the comparisons here with your total admiration taking over your entire thoughts.

I'm sure she appreciates and feels the same way too.

Thanks for delightful, heartfelt share.

Babs xx

[Khaaki]

Your life is the most beautiful song
I cling to your music all day long....... my favs. u hav done a splendid job as usual... wonderful craig

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Your life is the most beautiful song
I cling to your music all day long

Those two lines alone are full of the deepest admiration... the poem as a whole was a touch of humanity wearing a romantic glove.

[cheynicole]

wow craig that was beautiful... i have no words

[emmajoy]

What a beautifully romantic, tender poem! I love the way you bring music and colour into your writing about such a sweet love, it's like painting a masterpiece and surrounding it with a beautiful frame.

These words are a song in themselves, 'Forever in silvery symphony With slides and slurs and harmony'

[loowzerX]

this is wonderful. awesome pic too :)