THE EDGE OF HAPPY

I think I can see it from here... :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

On a marble ledge gazing down

Gray cold edge; indigo loneliness

A glass of All-Irish Black and Tan

Taking sips rich and dark as night

I hear a soft golden voice within

Feel the kiss of a scented breeze

Turn to see your smile light the room

I feel colored in carnival electric

Do you see me standing here?

Not breathing as I steal glimpses

Heart coming alive in your tone

Your laugh, what a brilliant caffeine

On the sunrise edge of happy now

At least I can finally see it from here

It’s resting across the room in your eyes

Please just look my way forever...

Please…

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'I feel colored in carnival electric ~ Do you see me standing here?'

Wonderful 'carnival electric' .. it sizzles. 'Indigo loneliness' .. nobody should be that lonely.

Another beautiful poem about love; methinks you love love - and it shows.

[Ladysue]

This was stunning...truly beautiful. Rich and vibrant...loved it...

[Jenny Nelson]

What a beautiful and exciting write. Makes you want a continuation. Great piece.

"Your laugh, what a brilliant caffeine" Really love that line.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is no greater rush then looking into the eyes of love... again you displayed your romantic side with great flare.