SPEAK WITH ME

Teach me how to love you deeply… I want to… in every way… and I make this promise to you… I will.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Speak with me

Let me dance in the lucid waves of your thoughts

Understanding your deepest places

You have dreams, fears, desires, interests, and aspirations

Speak them to me… I will breathe mine into you as well…

 

Sit by me

May silence sing over us like autumn winds

Recognizing your sweet presence

We need the scent of each other to fill us and define us

Sit here beside me and be with me… just be with me…

 

Share with me

Give me gifts of chocolate covered smiles

Knowing your loving expressions

I’ll learn your loves as well, to give to you just because

Share with me those small joys that mean so much…

 

Serve by me

Our hands together making light work

Realizing we were meant to be us

I commit my hands and my back to help carry your load

Serve my needs and let me serve you every day…

 

Stroke me gently

Weave your fingers in mine like a French tapestry

Appreciating how our heat melts us into one

Sensuality fires passion, you always will be my one obsession

Stroke my skin, and let me learn to please you in every way…

 

Author's Note

Inspired by the book “The Five Love Languages” by Gary Chapman. He lists these as Words of Affirmation, Quality Time, Receiving Gifts, Acts of Service, and Physical Touch. Each of us needs these in a relationship (given and received), though everyone uniquely requires a differing mix in order to feel most loved and accepted…

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

There was a time, long ago, that all five of these things
were found... then lost. Or, thrown away.
Each of these 5 things are expressed beautifully and I
felt the sensation of a tear well up... are these things
really possible? Can a man really love a woman like this
visa versa? I used to believe this to be true. Now, I find
that life is simply too cruel and at this age, it's simply
too late. Nothing is as it should be, nor ever shall be...
YET, this poem bleeds Hope!! Love it :)

[Abdul Aziz]

Great poem! The one word to describe it, is found in the poem itself. It is a tapestry of wondrous thoughts woven together perfectly. I don't think I have any constructive criticism to offer, unfortunately, as I don't think there is any way in which this can be better. Great job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

To love completely is to appreciate every level of the significant other... and using every sense we have is the way to do it. Another blissfully romantic poem.

[Sam Severn]

Your poems are always, always, always a source of great inspiration, and conjure my deepest feelings of love for everything in my life! You always make me feel all is possible, all is forgivable, all is sacred, n' that our world is the work of many hearts....THANK YOU!! ㋡

[Amy Bumpas]

I love the line: "teach me to love you deeply." That
is just so damn romantic:). This is what love should look
like, feel like, but to me it feels more like a fairytale.

Unconditional love...a release to just feel.

You have some great lines here: Let me dance in the lucid waves of your thoughts
Understanding your deepest places


We need the scent of each other to fill us and define us
I commit my hands and my back to help carry your load
Romantic, sensual write:)

[Seashell]

Ah...the perfect relationship in the making. If these 5 things are followed with tender loving care and commitment....the road will be sweet for both invloved.

Very passionately put together.
Thanks for such a beautiful share.

Babs xx

[deeps]

This is such a lovely write here. Quite the refreshing feel to it.
Amazing write Craig.

[Julijana Velichkovska]

Romantic and sweet love poem...

[Jasmine]

beautiful...romantic...together.
two people become one, two halves a whole.