I AM PIECES

For anyone I have ever known…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am pieces

Bits of this

splinters of that

Colored memories

And you are here

Inside me

A fragment of who I am

Not quite me

Without your piece

So many thoughts

Recollections

Faces

Pain

Pleasure

Glued together

They make me

They undo me

They stir me

Bits of tears

First kiss

graduations

Falling

Rising

joy

depression

life

Now please hand me that

piece over there

 

Reviews

[the_stoic]

different acquaintances - different perspectives ! its strange how a person is based on how he is considered by his folks . everyone it seems has a piece of us .. depending on how close they are the sizes vary ..

you have certainly got an artistic bend of mind .. the picture is fabulous and gels together really well with the theme ! not to forget the different fonts used and the color scheme applied

[Johnny Monroe]

A lot of good thinking went into this one! The feeling you get from reading it is perfect, enjoy it a lot good job!!!

[Jenny Nelson]

"Now please hand me that piece over there."
Perfect. Great depiction of life... no wonder I'm so tired most of the time... up and down, up and down. I love the way this is written. The flow of it really adds to the feel of it. Excellent piece. Really is.

[Amy Bumpas]

The different stages of life well put together
in this poem. Our pieces are thrown around, but
do we ever get them back. Life takes so much out
of us at times. Nice work:)

[John Stussy]

Beautifully written retrospective poem Craig. People do leave their mark one way or another, and every interaction whittles us into something new each time, even if it is just in a small way. Memory is retained, and we act according to those memories. Well done man.

[Lilly]

I thought this was brilliant! Great poem, interesting to read visually and such a beautiful concept. Very creative.

[Ladysue]

This is awesome. So well done and highly creative. I enjoyed this as it has real merit within its message. Great title too...

[TheStubbornPen]

Love this ending. And the fragmented nature of the poem, good choice visually. You could have gone further with that theme by using different fonts. Just an idea. The title is very good too. I can tell you put some thought into this. ^_^

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Wow!!!...your effort shows here,in the selection of the picture,of the format of the poem.All is so well thought out and so well written.
Indeed we are not just ourselves,but a mosaic of many people,thoughts that cross our path.

[zombiikillah666]

hhmmm....very interesting.
and very totally awesome.
*pours you tea*
i like this... (: