I AM PIECES

For anyone I have ever known…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am pieces

Bits of this

splinters of that

Colored memories

And you are here

Inside me

A fragment of who I am

Not quite me

Without your piece

So many thoughts

Recollections

Faces

Pain

Pleasure

Glued together

They make me

They undo me

They stir me

Bits of tears

First kiss

graduations

Falling

Rising

joy

depression

life

Now please hand me that

piece over there

 

Reviews

[the_stoic]

different acquaintances - different perspectives ! its strange how a person is based on how he is considered by his folks . everyone it seems has a piece of us .. depending on how close they are the sizes vary ..

you have certainly got an artistic bend of mind .. the picture is fabulous and gels together really well with the theme ! not to forget the different fonts used and the color scheme applied

[Tate Morgan]

I imagine this to be how llife feels at the moment I hope you get hold on your reality sooner rather than later It is after all all we have

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Every action we do, every action against us, everyone we meet becomes a part of who we are so as long as we breath we grow in pieces... excellent way to describe this process.

[Bare trees]

Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Your a great poet to always come back to because of your creativeness and this poem is just another example of your wonderful flow that never ceases to amaze me. Always a great job.

[NSisifo]

I used to make collages all the time. They would have photos of houses I liked, starry skies, guys I thought were cute, sand, sketches I'd done, etc. The different fonts and colors reminded me of the last one I made.
And while they say pictures are worth a thousand words, these words are worth a thousand pictures.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this and feel it .. your last line makes me feel as if one piece of you is missing... then found ...
It is sad and brings many thoughts and memories to mind ... I wish we could all have one do over in life..

Loved the poem picture and the author is nice too!

Chloe

[Wicahpi]

Life is a continual piece of our own mural.
Loved each facet! Well done & congrats!

[Alicante lullaby]

memories are pieces of us...some to make cry others to make us laugh.

[Fran Marie]

Faces
Pain
Pleasure
Glued together
They make me
They undo me
They stir me


What a beautiful work of art this piece truly is
so lovely in format and poetic expression and
the ending sums it up quite nicely indeed; always another piece~

Outstanding!