I AM PIECES

For anyone I have ever known…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am pieces

Bits of this

splinters of that

Colored memories

And you are here

Inside me

A fragment of who I am

Not quite me

Without your piece

So many thoughts

Recollections

Faces

Pain

Pleasure

Glued together

They make me

They undo me

They stir me

Bits of tears

First kiss

graduations

Falling

Rising

joy

depression

life

Now please hand me that

piece over there

 

Reviews

[the_stoic]

different acquaintances - different perspectives ! its strange how a person is based on how he is considered by his folks . everyone it seems has a piece of us .. depending on how close they are the sizes vary ..

you have certainly got an artistic bend of mind .. the picture is fabulous and gels together really well with the theme ! not to forget the different fonts used and the color scheme applied

[William]

This struck so true. Beautiful, true words.
"Now please hand me that
piece over there" That ending is simply perfect.
A great write, and a read that will stick with me for a very long time.

[Bubo]

Sometimes the running commentary of life seems to be pieces that fit, or don't fit........the layout is wonderful, and all the emotions creative and giving..........

Glued together

They make me

They undo me

They stir me

Wonderfully written, reminding me how life can be seen in pieces, and yet we can feel whole.

[Ardeh]

Love this. I love the subtle nature of this poem and how such little words can mean so much. :)

[FlawedByDesign]

In one of my poems I say,
"Without you, there is no me,
Pieces of a puzzle yet to be." - and this wonderful poem of yours made me think of it right away. What good are pieces when they don't comprise a whole, but you've provided the glue necessary with this piece, for all the pieces to come together and form the picture that is you, me, him/her, all of us.

Very nicely done.

[deeps]

Craig this is an amazing write here, I like the font used and the style of the wording.

Falling
Rising
joy
depression
life
Now please hand me that
piece over there

I really enjoyed these words, truthful.

[The Analog Kid]

Craig,

This is awesome. What creativity here. The font technique is cool too. Good ending. We are interconnected. All-around great themes, brother!

[Raja]

Wonderful! First, I thought why are you pieces by seeing the name of the poem itself. Now, I find we all are one with different fragments. :)

You are so very true in defining this here.

Thanks.

Raja

[Fabian G. Franklin]

No use in trying to see "the big picture" since God hid so many of the puzzle pieces to the jigsaw we call life. But we can use what we have and try to piece together a smaller version of our own world. I enjoyed this a great deal, fine writing my friend.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Too cool

[JENY]

wow…
seems like a firework of creativity….
Fantastic….!!!