Umbrella Man

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rainy days caress

the windows in silver

drizzled on the glass...

I want to curl up

and sleep in her mind

swim the deep water

of her dreams...

If the rain falls

like sad faces all around

then open me up

spread out my arms

I’ll cover her

and be her umbrella man

shade her from words

in the atmosphere

that descend like knives...

For now life painted wine red

dripping down my canopy

chocolate raindrops

mix with truffled kisses

confessions of forever...

Please let me swim

the deep water

of her dreams…

 

Author's Note

Or canapy man, brolly man, bumbershoot man, parapluie man… oh… you get the idea!

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

chocolate raindrops
mix with truffled kisses
confessions of forever...
Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed reading this my friend.

[Fran Marie]

For now life painted wine red
dripping down my canopy
chocolate raindrops
mix with truffled kisses


Such a sweet and romantic piece. am lovin' the 'chocolate raindrops'
and the truffled kisses don't sound too bad either~

Great poem my friend

[Jenny Nelson]

What a sweet and wonderful piece. Pleasant and warm. Lots of feeling. Love the title.

[Shalini Dinesh]

the choice of words were excellent, overall the poem was lovely to read...

[TamiViolet]

Love the entire feel of this one... from the graphic to the font to the words that drip softly from lips........ The narrator wants to consume her thoughts, be one with them.... although her life has been a sad one, yes?

'For now life painted wine red/dripping down my canopy....

Conclusion holds great power...

[Abdul Aziz]

I quite like the metaphors you have used. They are creative, and brim with lush imagery. There is an awful lot of imagination that has gone into writing this, and it shows in every sentence.
You have laid the message softly, and with great skill!
Awesome poem, bro.

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

How romantic. Very sweet :)

[deeps]

Choclate raindrops, sound good to me.
This is a lovely write Criag.
You are a master poet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

For now life painted wine red
dripping down my canopy
chocolate raindrops
mix with truffled kisses
confessions of forever...

oh very nice... might I even say sweetly romantic... the creative images invoke such tender emotions.

[Jenna]

shade her from words

in the atmosphere

that descend like knives...





That is my favorite line partly because it is so clever. I would never think about something like that. And it makes me feel like I should expand my creativity as a writer.