I WONT STOP BELIEVIN!

From Journey’s "Don’t Stop Believin"…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I remember the tune

Under the midnight moon

The small town girl

She lived in that lonely world…

♫ ♬♪  

And the music moved

How his journey proved

To that one city boy

Who’d come from South Detroit…

♫ ♬♪  

When the world comes in

Some lose and some win

I won’t stop believin

Must find a place to achieve in

Somewhere in the night…

♫ ♬♪  

Strangers wander up and down

That friendless boulevard in town

Those streetlight people roam

Cast their last dice for home…

♫ ♬♪  

Want to share that smile

See others brightened awhile

Been working hard to get my fill

Doesn’t everybody want that thrill?

♫ ♬♪  

When the world comes in

Some lose and some win

I won’t stop believin

Must find a place to achieve in

Somewhere in the night…

♫ ♬♪  

Oh, that movie never ends

It just goes on and on my friends…

♫ ♬♪  

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xIoSTbPt_PI

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy Sam Tsui’s Glee version of Don’t Stop Believin’ …

Reviews

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... beautifully written, Craig ... what a song ... so inspirational ... and so earnest ... the risk with writing something like this is that it could go over the top ... but you spin a magic song here ... amazingly well done ... liked these lines a lot ...

When the world comes in
Some lose and some win
I won’t stop believin
Must find a place to achieve in
Somewhere in the night…

[JENY]

that’s good….
Fine imagery….
I guess you might have bagged the prize in the contest……

[Dev]

Well I love this song.. Especially the Glee rendition.. .this is worthy of the blue ribbon !! :D Good job.. Well written !!!

[OkieWonKenokie]

So beautiful. Spectacular choosing of words and their placements. I love the rhythm to the poem.

[Cherrie Palmer]

very lovely

[Raja]

I am waiting to listen it in tune. I know i would create wonder as it takes fully of me by the words.

Thank you.

Raja

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This rocks. Very good lyrics."Strangers wander up and down/That friendless boulevard in town/Those streetlight people roam/Cast their last dice for home" I really liked that.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

loved it Craig and the song of Journey's also .. don't stop beleivin' a good motto and a great poem..

Chloe

[Ferg]

one of my favorites songs!

[Fran Marie]

Quite lovely and beautifully penned in artistic presentatation and
poetic expression~ a pleasure to read and very nice indeed

[AbsentElements]

It's always interesting when someone takes someone elses work and writes it down, only because they write it in new ways to make the piece more understandable. It has melody to it already, but the musical notes placed between each stanza just add to the effect.