a new SUNRISE

A new day is here…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

At the coming of a new sunrise

I will open up my azure eyes

And breathe in frosted air

That moves about so fresh and fair...

 

New light will flood my fragile mind

And boundless treasures I will find

Content with this no more

To be sealed inside my iron door...

 

Life is full of secret streams

That flow and feed our hungry dreams

To love will be my end

And living fierce for all my friends...

 

Those things the world has thrown at me

Will shatter weakly at my feet

And in the golden dawn

I’ll seize all hope and carry on...

 

Author's Note

I truly hope this is a fresh, new day for you as well...

Reviews

[Hamkar]

It's beautiful, I've always wondered how people make such good rhyming poems...

[SM Davis]

This reminds me of an Irish blessing. You are so good at the warm and fuzzies! :0)

[Stacey Watts]

This is a wonderful message. It has a very hopeful and meaningful tone. I like the positive words. Very strong.

[kait]

i really like this its really good

[Stephanie S]

such a beautiful poem...and the way it makes you realize each day is a new beginning...a new chance to overcome anything negative and embrace tomorrow full of hope..i love how you compare the ending of the day , full of challenges. to only then be hopeful for a new dawn tomorrow, a new chance to tun it all around...so true and something i think a lot of us overlook sometimes...so beautifully written....thank you so much for sharing....

[Ardeh]

Brilliant poem. Sophisticated yet subtle. It inspired me to stay motivated. Two thumbs up. :)

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Excellent. It flowed very well. I loved the font and color (how'd you make it like that? I guess that's new, haven't been on here for a while.) The picture is good, that's Dali, huh? I love Dali. Overall, beautiful imagery in this piece.

[Alicante lullaby]

i'll seize hope and carry on...bible words,my friend.

[Through the Gateway]

This is a wonderfully hopeful piece, Craig! Full of inspired thought as you face the coming day.

I hope it is a good one!

[Gheeneil]

Life gives us waves of challenges, and one best way to stay afloat is to ride on a canoe of hope and keep paddling. This is but a moving piece. Thanks for sharing! :)