Apricots and Summer

Apricots and Summer

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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She is... and more... so much more...

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She is apricots and summer

Delicious golden interludes

The fragrance of fresh coffee

Cuddles and hugs by autumn bonfires

Dawn dancing with rose petal lips

Taste of dark chocolate nibbles

Glinting winter snowfall grins

Stained glass window glimmers

Valentine lace and paper hearts

Spring robins and song sparrows

Shells collected at the seashore

Holidays and smooth red wine

She is…

 

© 2010 An owl on the moon


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Beautiful writing full of intensity of emotions for another.. the ending implying "SHE IS..." leaving the feelings infinite in definition .. a rambling mute who is left speechless with a sigh (lovelust can sooo have that effect).. what a nice feeling to have.. and share with other's as a Valentine's tribute. The painting gives us the still portrayal that is faceless and mysterious.. a shy side angle in a classy pose that has a hint of being provocative but in a great way. This had a really great essence and flow.. great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! What a unique and very romantic valentine this would make. Wonderful metaphors throughout it. A delight to read!

Posted 14 Years Ago


After reading this, that name of Craigspeare might be the appropriate one! So many stunning lines, and the font, my God. The whole thing is a most perfect Valentine's day poem, to see and read. Exceptional, as always!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is a yummy feel to eat and have sex LOL!
A foreplay of words, and simple aspects of life.
Here are some of my favorite lines:

Delicious golden interludes
Dawn dancing with rose petal lips
Taste of dark chocolate nibbles
Valentine lace and paper hearts
Nice write!


Posted 14 Years Ago


How beautiful and wonderfully pleasant. A very enjoyable, romantic, and uplifting read.
Very nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is absolutely delightful - what a wonderful St. Valentine's poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


She is da bomb( as the young ones say)..
Beautiful, eloquent, playful.. everything a loved one should be..
Another lovely piece Craigsphere!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Mmmmm delightful is this. Such a magical and romantic piece of work . I wish someone wrote this for me. What wonderful metaphors and personifications!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Look at all those eloquent ways to describe a woman you love,
now that is what I call first rate romantic.

Posted 14 Years Ago


a beautiful Valentine message!
all the joys nature has to offer.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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