IMMERSED

 

I want to immerse

myself in you
mesh together
hand-to-hand
heart-with-heart.

Memorize you

every dream

every freckle

every curve

every joy.

Absorbed.

Bathed.

Covered with us.

Saturated and

melting together

where each raindrop

is a recollection

of your smile

as the drops slither

slide down

slip over glass

gliding

like fingers

over your skin.

In the wind

I hear the echoes

of your voice

and feel your

soft caress.

So I gaze

glare

survey

stare

into your eyes

into your thoughts

into your mystery.

As snowflakes now
float and fall like
ashen butterflies

and blanket earth
may we blend

into one

becoming

completely

IMMERSED…

 

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

You are brilliant, dear poet. The notion of being completely 'immersed' into the one who holds our heart is elevating and oh, so passionate.

'Memorize you/every dream/every freckle/every curve/...'

I'm smiling and thinking, for truly fortunate is the gal who wins your heart. So very exceptional, my friend.

[Fran Marie]

Quite Lovely this truly is~it just glides across the page ever so gently

warm cascading words of sheer beauty ~sprinkled with fine alliterations thru~out

Passionate and oh soo Blissfully romantic!!

[Tracie Skarbo]

This is amazing...and going into my favorites. I especially love this part...

As snowflakes now
float and fall like
ashen butterflies
and blanket earth

you never disappoint! Excellent imagery!

[A Wanderer of Dreams]

This poem describes the deep infatuation love brings out in us all. You portrayed one of the most luxurious moments in human life very well. It was simply beautiful.

[deeps]

Such a woderful, beuatiful passionate write here. So sensous as well. I like this it's very well written.

[Stacey Watts]

Very passionate beautiful piece. This was wonderful and sweetly sensual. A nice dreamy feel to it as well. Excellent job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Craig that was really sensual and romantic... I too just love to memorize every inch of the one I love, the heart and mind as well as the body, for when you love someone you should never get enough. Excellent work.