In whispered worlds of chance...

 

Do dreams die or merely sleep

in whispered worlds of chance?

And will I find the Wonderland

I saw in your first, sweet glance?

 

Is the world of substance all

one can ever hope to hold?

Are there not deeper worlds

with numberless gifts untold?

 

I feel you so much closer now

as fleeting glimpses wink and sigh.

And I reach for you in my dreams;

the touch of your soft skin’s lullaby.

 

I will search a thousand skies

in endless sunsets’ scarlet bliss.

Until I find your dreamish life

and am awakened by your kiss.

 

Author's Note

I still believe dreams do come true...

Reviews

[E. A. Fielder]

oh this was a very sweet poem. I feel like this would be more dedicated to a child than a spouse.

"Is the world of substance all

one can ever hope to hold?

Are there not deeper worlds

with numberless gifts untold?"

It sounds as if you are talking about the gift of a child, or the love from a child.

[MagiCrystal]

This is the peace between a man and a woman and no questions..This is the awakening of dream painted by skilled hands.. genius

[Helen Crutchett]

Oh beautiful. I was going to pick a favorite stanza, but I couldn't choose as they were all perfectly delightful. No.... I AM going to quote my favorite, I can't resist! lol


"I feel you so much closer now
as fleeting glimpses wink and sigh.
And I reach for you in my dreams;
the touch of your soft skin’s lullaby"


Romantic and sweet poem.

Helena

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

And dreams, some how, always come true! :)

[Wolf]

In the first stanza the word "sweet" kinda through me off. Other than that I thought it was a great write!

[cartera]

A good poem. However, it is another love poem of which there is a surfeit on this site. Reading your profile, i hope that there is much more to come as I read your stuff.
ATB

[C.A.B.S.]

very warm poem. I almost feel like the dreaminess is almost more reflective than a dedication. I agree with EAFielder this is more of a child than spouse dedication. Overall I love it

[Fran Marie]

I will search a thousand skies
in endless sunsets' scarlet bliss


Blissfully romantic expressed so nicely in soft flowing verse, as always an
enjoyable read~great pen!

[Jola]

Such a beautiful poem full of warm words.
Jola

[Jenny Nelson]

Very pleasant, hopeful, and beautiful. Not so sure myself that dreams come true, but what you so wonderfully describe here sounds out of this world. Excellent write.

[Through the Gateway]

A wonderful work of art, Craig! The longing for someone who's mere presence seems unobtainable in our physical world, and yet we dream of them so vividly that we often wonder if it is not possible to bring them closer just by the sheer thought of them.

An excellent and beautiful write, Craig.