Numberless Things...

 

Voiceless words… songless birds

Pale yellow thoughts to drift and dance

 Robin strong… mockingbird song

Tales of knights in a lavish romance.

 

Tropic lands… the warmest sands

Journeys in our flawed perfection

Guitar strings… numberless things

Soft cotton covers your blush’d reflection.

 

Cloudless sky… a cobalt lullaby

Limitless visions skip into sight

Man of birth… one of colored Earth

Wuthering winds sing songs of night…

 

Reviews

[Tracie Skarbo]

Cloudless sky� a cobalt lullaby
Limitless visions skip into sight
Man of birth� one of colored Earth
Wuthering winds sing songs of night�


This was my favorite stanza...I love the fantasy of your pen. Such wonderous visions come out of your soul when you create. Another amazing waltz...thanks for the dance!

[Nautili]

I like how the two different images in each first and third line harmonize so very well.The second and fourth lines are the dreamy looks into your romantic soul. nice symmetry.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

That was such a beautiful piece of writing..
The irony is this piece is very striking.
"Cloudless sky� a cobalt lullaby" - I loved this line the most , its very poetic...The entire writing is actually very lyrical :)
Great work.

[Sorry Infamous]

Lovely collection of words that dance on the tongue...

[Deepshikha]

The font was kind of distracting, but other than that, this was a really...dunno...Celtic[?] sounding poem. The themes, anyway. But I really liked this
I think "Cloudless sky� a cobalt lullaby" describes the poem quite well. [:

[Stacey Watts]

Wow this was beautiful. Nicely done. This was a very sweet piece but very passionate.

[Georgia Gypsy]

Oh wow Craig!
I love the flow and movement through out this piece.
So beautifully lyrial! Creates such lovely pictures as i read, it was a breath of fresh air for the soul!

smiles,
kelli

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the light atmospheric feel of this piece, it lifts me off to a fantasy land of enchantment and giving me a moment of joy plus getting my imagination flowing.

[Honeypot]

I really liked what you did with this piece. Its got a wonderful tone about it and it really sparks the imagination with its many wonderful lines. Great job with this.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very nicely expressed and quite lovely. I enjoyed the read.

[Kitty]

This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the picture you put with it is stunning. Your words always manage to evoke the strongest emotions... Perfection is found in your writing!!!!!!