She�s the only one�

She�s the only one�

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Another page from my diary�

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Life…

such a journey…

Been so many cold days;

so many lonely moments

even in those crowded rooms.

And when she came along

I don’t think she knew

just how much she gave to me

with a simple smile

her kind hello.

My heart felt alive again

felt like I could do anything

with her close.

Now all I think of

is being with her;

making her happy.

I want to see her

dressed in white.

Want to dance

with our children

by the sea.

Want her to know

she’s the only one

who can make me tremble.

The only one

who melts me like wax.

The only one

I want to grow old with.

She’s the only one…

 

© 2009 An owl on the moon


Author's Note

An owl on the moon
�The most important thing in life is to learn how to give out love, and to let it come in�� ~ Morrie Schwartz

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Tuesdays with Morrie- In my top ten fav books(your quote)
What you have written here is what I call soulful loving. really loving from the interior and recieving that in return. You have a way of baring your heart to us lucky readers, and giving us a life lesson alon the path. Such a beautiful poem/write and I for one thank you so much for sharing such a personal, honest write. Lovely!1

Posted 15 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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This made me sigh a happy and wistful sigh. I want someone to love me this way ...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Tremendous meaning in this one.. a very high tribute to a possible soul mate I felt! I think many wander feeling alone (though sometimes this indicates an inner struggle with happiness with self). I feel a sense that you are happy with yourself.. did feel like many do wanting that special partner... and wow found the one you'd like to see wear white and dance with your future children! How profound is that.. I am always lost in a field of romantic blur when I read your writings.. I hope you share this with her!!! Great, great inspiration and also fierce passion and yearning in the undertones.. Hope this works out for you cause it's beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As ever, Craig, a tender, heartfelt piece, rejoicing in the love of The One. M. is a lucky lass indeed!
Several of your recent pieces have been accompanied by pictures of a single tall man, and a brunette woman, in an airport, on a gymnasium floor...Do you perchance have a friend who is a photographer?

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is so beautiful, so much love, so much passion . Love it:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful piece of writing but then, that applies to all your poems! This really does touch the heart, makes me feel something deep inside and, I'm sure, makes all women yearn to have words like that written about them.

Thank you so much for sharing your feelings and beautiful poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful passionate piece. It is simply a romantic sweet flowing work of beauty. Excellent job

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful, it moves the soul.
You are a romantic and I am so happy you share your wonderful words with us all!


Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I want to see her
dressed in white.
Want to dance
with our children
by the sea.

Awl...this is so very touching. Gentle and adoring just like I like love poems. It sounds like young love. Super duper write!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Want her to know
she's the only one
who can make me tremble.
The only one
who melts me like wax.
The only one
I want to grow old with.
She's the only one�


O' my gosh, how lovely this truly is~ a deep devotion of love indeed springs forth in

beautiful poetic expression~ Awesome Versed poetry here my friend!


Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

What a sweet diary you have, my friend!
Such beautiful visions, and wonderful dreams. You piece them together like prayers whispered while falling asleep late at night, simply waiting to go meet her. Lovely images, all of them.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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