She�s the only one�

Another page from my diary�

 

Life…

such a journey…

Been so many cold days;

so many lonely moments

even in those crowded rooms.

And when she came along

I don’t think she knew

just how much she gave to me

with a simple smile

her kind hello.

My heart felt alive again

felt like I could do anything

with her close.

Now all I think of

is being with her;

making her happy.

I want to see her

dressed in white.

Want to dance

with our children

by the sea.

Want her to know

she’s the only one

who can make me tremble.

The only one

who melts me like wax.

The only one

I want to grow old with.

She’s the only one…

 

Author's Note

�The most important thing in life is to learn how to give out love, and to let it come in�� ~ Morrie Schwartz

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Tuesdays with Morrie- In my top ten fav books(your quote)
What you have written here is what I call soulful loving. really loving from the interior and recieving that in return. You have a way of baring your heart to us lucky readers, and giving us a life lesson alon the path. Such a beautiful poem/write and I for one thank you so much for sharing such a personal, honest write. Lovely!1

[Mary Fioratti]

Craig: Sometimes I re-read my poems...and I think: "Why it is so difficult to me to write about another thing instead of LOVE?" But what I really think is that Love moves the world in all ways... and how is wonderful when we love someone and feel the same love back. Your poem has such a tenderness...and such a sweetness. Mostly when you say : "I want to grow old with..she is the only one"... I think we really know the love, when we want to grow old with someone...
Beautiful ..Beautiful...
*Mary*

[Effy]

This brought a tear to my eye and gave me goosebumps. Absolutely incredible.. Really enjoyed reading this. Loved it!!!

[Dana Kathryn]

This is a Beautiful write...I once had a mans love so strong like this...It is a soulful,amazing feeling to have a man write about a woman like this! Very sweet and loving write! :0)

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how beautiful...

[Wicahpi]

I would hope that everyone could find their "Only One".
Sweetness invoked here.

[Khaaki]

wonderful feelings... love is eternal and should come from within...

[Lilly]

this is incredible! - you convey so much through your words - the longing/desire/ hopeful wishing/yearing in this poem is beautiful, as is the whole concept of this poem.

Another great poem :)

[Sorry Infamous]

"so many lonely moments even in those crowded rooms."... how true about life... sad and yet you make it warm and beautiful with the rest of your lovely well crafted words. I feel we can never be truely alone and give up on love with a writer so skillfull and full up with romance as yourself.

[Colleen Margot Lee]

This is beautiful. I love the longing within it.

[Stephanie]

Aww, this is so sweet! Very touching :]