What a beautiful piece of writing ... it's a poem with the gentlest, truest passion. I can almost feel myself there with you and your lucky lady, and, the picture illustrates your post wonderfully well.
There are so many memorable lines: 'Your heart smiles / at rainbows, / and toads, / and good friends' = smiling at that... then: ' Those funny words / you say / when you / stub your toe, / and the look / on your face' .. .. this reader thinks her ways, even to bare feet (as per pic') and your love, go wonderfully well together.
Thank you for sharing this almost intimate post .. going to rate it perfect. ( Well, just discovered I can't but, that doesn't stop me from stating that it is! )
Wow! This is so lovely and so beuatiful Simply amazing Craig.
I don't think I could point out a fave line they are all equally as beuatiful
This is a remarkable write from your heart.
Craig, I could sit and literally read you all day.....and I really mean it. I smiled when I read about 'the freckle'....the way she stubbed her toe... I seldom wear socks around the house, and I'm constantly stubbing my toes.....I even broke two of them...lol. Oh, and the 'black panties' in your pocket...........
Does love like you describe really exist forever? I mean, is it realistic to think we are capable of loving someone that passionately.....for eternity....? Or should we have several lovers in a lifetime, depending upon our situation/circumstances... I'm off track here, but I've been thinking about this a lot lately....
If you are writing about a specific woman in your life....what a very fortunate woman she is! And you to have her as you express not only her beauty and sensuality, but her kindness and generousity of spirit....
I want someone to see me this way..... All women want to be seen this way........
I concur with Emma....perfect....yet again, Dear Craig.
this is truely a very deep passionate piece.... the imagery just flows through this one... another heartfelt masterpiece from you... very nicely done..
This is such a romantic beautiful piece. Romantic and completely sweet. It is nice to be able to experience all the aspects of love that is so sweet. Very well done.
Reading this beautiful ode to your love is so uplifting. I agree with Emma, just a wonderful, inspiring, perfect write. I too thank you for sharing and showing this type of write.
Fanciful and soft mbitions set adrift upon a purple skyline craig, your wife is drawn upon in a special way that renders reverence for true love. Masterfully written and art sculpted
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..