In Grayed Reflections...

 

 

Grayed mirrors

imitate my dance

reflecting my thoughts…

Smiling

Shouting

Speaking…

Echoed hearts

moving slow

on mornings light…

A likeness

of dreams

of desires

of a destiny…

All that I have

imitating

reflecting…

I stare

I gaze

I watch

mesmerized                   

wondering

What will you tell me today?

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Through the looking glass What would we see if we could see the way we see our selves The way others see us and the way we truly are?
Tate

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh the metaphors that can so exist in this one!!! Powerful word usage.. grayed mirrors can be an aging reflection or feeling of not seeing in living colour such sad reality.. also reflecting your thoughts as well.. I do not like those gray days.. I hope you see with more colour today!!! This can also reflect the world today that is surrounding us .. the grayness of the times.. there is always light and colour around but you have to want to see it.. never give up on your dreams or desires as well.. you are such a gifted writer.. this gift surely will be your footprint! Thank you for sharing!!! =)

[Gandré]

I liked the opening of your poem and your photoshoped picture, perfect stepping out from the wings into his mind... and how you said this - I loved.

[Kimberly Smith]

that was sooo deep... that mirrors tell us more. so true and just a great write !! nicely done

[Anastasia Starlena]

Mirrors never lie. They are such a physical way to measure our outward appearance. But the mirror that lives inside of us reads our spirit, mind, body and soul. The importance of all who we truly are. Great piece.

[Gheeneil]

Mirrors do flaunt us the truth---something we usually blind ourselves with. We're just truth-deprived and looking at the mirror allows us to get access to self-interaction: Time for reality check.

[Stephanie]

This is really beautiful and thought provoking. I actually have a poem called "Mirror" that's kind of like (but also nothing like) this. I really loved this!

[Brianna Brie]

This is a fascinating piece. I haven't been able to pull of one and two word lines myself. Your words play off of each other building intensity. Amazing write!

[emmajoy]

You be careful, very careful.. you never know what she might say next!

As usual you've touched a chord here, beautiful words, simply but sincerely put and, rolled into yet another of your fine, fine poems. You never fail to deliver.

' Echoed hearts .. moving slow .. on mornings light� ' there's a painting in those words, can see it so clearly.

Thank you, thank you for sharing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The reflection in the mirror is a bit hazy for it only tells part of the story showing only the hear and now but can never duplicate the past and it's impact. A fascinating and thought provoking write.