>>>SUNRISE<<<

 

 

Yellow orb, glowing light

Breaking fiercely through the night…

Piercing darkness and cold

Filling starless skies with gold…

Hope is born in your eyes

I see the crystal shining glinter…

You are the spring sunrise

At the end of a long, cold winter…

Reviews

[Sean Allen]

Loved it too, who would not?
"crystal shining glinter" nice grouping of words

As no one loved and worshipped the sun more than the ancient Egyptians in the form of Amon-Re and Aten or Aton, etc. I wonder if you inentionaly chose to use the "Papyrus" font for this poem about the Sun.

ps: it looks like my good friend Helen is back, I'm off to see what time it is Down Under.

[Helen Woodward]

STUNNING WORK CRAIG!!!!!! I absolutely love this, you are such a romantic and I would think that any girl would be lucky to have you in her life. It is the way you think that brings about your excellent phrasing...
Just praise my friend and KUDOS!!!!
Cheers,
Helen :-)

[Gandré]

this is so sweet, I like your shining, warming poem. so vidid!

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very beautiful piece. Very warming and sweet.

[Wildfleour]

Aaahhh..........

[Jinx's Heart]

Wow! Such amazing and beautiful imagery! I can feel the warmth of the morning sun rising higher and higher as the winter evening dies off. Just wow! Amazing writing. :)

[Kitty]

This is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So sweet and tender. Kitty likes :)

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[Enthusiast]

Hello Craig,

... again your poetry does not disappoint! This is beautiful, and I cherish the sentiment. You really know how to paint a canvas with words.

For my birthday last year I went to Cape Cod and struggled out of bed in the wee hours of the morning in order to witness just what you describe: a spring sunrise. The day was cold and cloudy, but the beauty of the tentative sunrise was indescribable. Quite metaphorical, too.

I don't have a favorite verse - I love it all!

Keep up the great work!

[BABSIE BEE]

"At the end of a long cold winter" all we want to hear is your lovely warm words. mmmmmwah !!!
Thanking you graciously,
Babsie Bee xx

[emmajoy]

What beautiful words, they seem almost metaphorical.. so much expressed and so wonderfully.

' Breaking fiercely through the night� / Piercing darkness and cold / Filling starless skies with gold�' - you are so much a poet and painter combined, you use words and pictures to fill the mind.

Thank you so much for sharing.