SUN, SEA, AND SKY...

 

SUN

Music of morning

Warm radiance of day

Dancing across moon’s face

Mystic, movement at dawn…

 

SEA

Moving in melody

Song of blue life

Restless peace inspired

Deep, sensual joy at midday…

 

SKY

A painted tapestry

Of azure, white, and gray

Like ruby lips at dawn

Rich, golden skin at dusk…

 

Life

To live without the

Sun, sea, or sky but

Never wanting to live

A day without your love…

 

Reviews

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow this piece is really beautiful!! You took all the wonderful paintings God as placed on this earth and put them together wonderfuly!

[LoLo]

"Like ruby lips at dawn
Rich, golden skin at dusk"

This to me is like a breath of fresh air...I could melt into the scene...

[Brianna Brie]

SKY
A painted tapestry
Of azure, white, and gray
Like ruby lips at dawn
Rich, golden skin at dusk�

This is a magnificent poem!! Wow...I thought where is he going with this one? So, far it doesn't fit his descriptive line, and then you pulled it all together with that last verse. I just adore "ruby lips at dawn". Such beauty....

[Seriana]

Ahhh, glorious colors painted on the canvas of life. Such beauty they doth bring, no? To see in color....Craig, you have a magnificent fiery vision. You always light up my screen with splendid word pictures. :)

[Stephanie]

Wow! All your poems just hit me in the heart, right where it counts. You say so much in so few words and I don't know if I've told you this before, but I hope I can eventually write like this. This was so beautiful. Especially at the end, after describing sea, sun and sky, then dismissing them as long as you could have that special someone's love. I admire this poem and I admire you. Great great job Craig :)

[Arthur Henn]

Brother Craig, in a nutshell. You brought the canapy of life and love from within the soul of love, showing the depth of a mans heart through the love and reflections of his eyes.

Great Poem.

Art

[Kelley]

I really liked the font you did this in.
I loved the poem too. It was perfect and it made you feel
like spring was finely here.

Great write Craig ! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Jessica M.]

Beautiful.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Beautifully said. I like the form, and the way you've separated and described each blessing. Very cool!
Enjoyed!
Cheers!
G

[Wildfleour]

So sweet.