A THOUSAND THINGS...

A THOUSAND THINGS...

A Poem by An owl on the moon
"

a thousand words... a thousand smiles... a thousand embraces...

"

 

Your heart captured me
so fully as I read
your letters
for weeks
and months.
So beautiful
so loving
so kind
You encouraged me
inspired me
lifted me
in every way
made me feel
so full
so complete.
A thousand words...

Your smile is sunshine
your touch so electric
flowing through me
like a river
washing over me
like a soft rain.
You give of yourself
to make others happy
And in all you do
I smile
I laugh
I sigh
just knowing you
A thousand smiles...

A gentle heart
for your family
your friends
your neighbors
that shows me
a love so caring
Every moment
you spend with me
shows me such love
such beauty
such depth
in your mind
your heart
your soul
A thousand embraces...

Everything about you
excites me
awakens me
challenges me
I thought I'd known love
but never like this
never what I sense
in your life
for me
So powerful
so deep
so overwhelming
A thousand things
I love about you
and I could find
a thousand more
every day
for the rest of our lives...

© 2009 An owl on the moon


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What a beautiful poem, and, so beautifully formatted too!

Your posts are always wonderful but, there's something special in this one. It expresses so many feelings, such deep feelings - 'I thought I'd known love / but never like this / never what I sense / in your life / for me' ..

.. and, long may that feeling continue.

Thank you for sharing such a magical piece of writing.


Posted 15 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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how lovely to have someone feel this way about you.. I think this generates a real emotion from the words..I was a little choked..really special

Posted 14 Years Ago


You always write very eloquently but as another review here says,there is something special here..i see you here with your heart in your hands for all to see,and you are proud of the halo of love that encircles it.Lovely.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a lovely piece of poetry. I hate the cursive font, it's hard for my old eyes to focus on, other than that, delightful and beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


One of the best love poems I read for long time ! ... I love to feel like that , I am happy you found the one you love ! Yossi

Posted 14 Years Ago


you write what the heart wants to hear and what words seldom say......and while some may think it drips with a touch too much honey.....to the one you are cloud walking with .......it will mean the world. Heavy sigh and all the girls swoon :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such words you write describing passion in such a way is truly beautiful. This was very well written. A true work of art.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could say a tthousand wonderful things about this piece.
Beautifully written, lovely font , inspiring message.

Such adoration to a loved one.
Another piece of art from your pen my friend!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful and well-put-together. The font you used for the poem is a little hard to read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is so elegant and lovely. I can really feel the love and adoration in this piece of work.
It is truly sweet, and I really enjoyed reading it.
Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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