WHEN I DIE...

My life's prayer... (Because I have loved life, I shall have no sorrow to die - Amelia Burr)

 

 

When I die

I do not wish

To merely slumber into the grave

But to yield my last breath

Of my own will

When I die

I shall be found

Seeking Valhalla

Place of honor

The heavens

Having lived not fearing death

Nor fearing life

But clinging with fierceness

To all that is holy

all that is good

Life surrendered to the flames

To the orphans and the widows

To hope and peace

Not selfish glory

When I die

May I be on fire

burning bright

Like the sun

devouring the world

With my passion

And when I die,

I pray

I hope

I resolve

To die

Having been fully alive…

 

 

 

Author's Note

The Greeks didn't write obituaries... They only asked one question after a man died: "Did he have passion?"

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

Craig, from one brother to another. "When you die, you will be remembered as a man of love that loves the gifts of beauty that God has bestowed upon your heart that is seen through the eyes of a man named Craig. Your poems, your writings, and your book (An Owl On The Moon) i think its called...If not, I'm sorry, will be the legacy left behind from a soul that has walked, talked and graced these crossroads that we all walk together. Your words will be left behind as a tool for others to read. Today, tomorrow, and forever in the hearts of all that come to know you in person and the words you write.

Art

[the_stoic]

"To die
Having been fully alive…" ... this particular statement encompasses the all in all of what life should be in its truest sense . sadly though some men do acknowledge the fact that life is meant to be lived fully , at times they just aren't able to .. nice write

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Wow! seem yet simple in it's words. No fearing death nor life, and when you die you will have been fully alive. Nice work.

[MagiCrystal]

Yes.. and abundant.Like a storm..
Love this poem... so dark and so real

[Saki]

Amazing. This made me aware of my life and made me ask myself if I am indeed living life fully, passionately and purposely.

[Wunderlich]

This is excellent. Definitely a lot of passion in this piece. Another great poem.

[MagiCrystal]

OF COURSE ... YOU HAVE PASSION... IT IS ALL OVER YOUR PAGE..

[MagiCrystal]

SOULS DO CRY...AND I WANTED TO TELL YOU... DEATH IS INEVITABLE..
SOME DAY...AFRAID YET.. SO COLD..WHAT YOU WILL SAY TO THE ANGEL OF DEATH..
NOT CRY... OR.. DEEP INSIDE.. WORDS WILL DIED..BRAVO.. LOVE IT.. LOVE IT.. UNIQUE VERSES..

[Helen Crutchett]

Intense poem full of passion alright! The passion almost jumped off the page in this. I loved the font and the style you wrote this in.

"Having lived not fearing death
Nor fearing life
But clinging with fierceness
To all that is holy
all that is good"

That sums you up my friend. Again great write and much enjoyed by me!

Helena

[Nicole]

I love this.
It made me tear up..haha.
It was that amazing.
Props to you for writing this.

[Tracie Skarbo]

Wow this has such an intense power in it. You will be remembered of that I have no doubt. I personally think that your book should be read in schools...and poems such as these should be taught as well. I am inspired by your writes and the way you tackle life and all it brings forth. Excellent job here!