I didn't...

I didn't...

A Poem by An owl on the moon
"

The ache of waking up and not feeling you near...

"

 

 

I didn’t feel you

skin so soft and warm

nails drifting down my back…

 

I didn’t hear your voice

softest music to my ears

awakening my sleeping eyes…

 

I didn’t taste your lips

candy-coated miracles

stirring me to life…

 

I didn’t feel your presence 

called to you in whispers

but you weren’t here…

 

© 2009 An owl on the moon


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Love your choice of words, this piece creates a bittersweet atmosphere. I also had a deja vu reading this.
Well-done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dang this really does give the sense of heartache and loneliness... simple yet so powerfully stated.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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