I heard the sound of an angels wings

 

 

I heard the sound of an angel's wings

a flutter, a flurry, I feel your touch…

Heard the echo of their sighing music

like whispers uttered in the darkness

like breath softly stroking naked air…

Feathers soft, fragrant like snowdrops

Stirring the darkness with wispy winds…

I hear the sound of an angel’s wings

And you walk through the door…

Hush...

Hush...

Hush...

 

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

How the hell do you write like this!??!?!?!?!?!? You and another favorite here Siddartha, have an uncanny way of writing so romantically poetic! This is something I've been trying to do(and failing terribly), but you have a great, sensitive, and visual pen that keeps me intrigued and puts me into YOUR mood! This was incredible and I envy your talent!

[We are young.]

Your words are so descriptive so beautiful! I loved
"Like breath, softly stroking naked air." It paints a vivid picture, you come up with the most glorious metaphors. They never cease to amaze me. Amazing write. Your words are always a great joy to read.

[Valentine]

Sweet yet beautiful write..love like what comes from an angel...it must be Heaven..I will have to tell you sometime of the angel wings my sisters and I felt when my father was dying..lol and God bless..Kathie

[Samuel Dickens]

If I ever need a pick-up line in heaven, I'll use this. Really refined, romantic writing, Craig.

[Seashell]

Fabulous, floaty cute and soooo romantic.

Thank you

Babs xx

[A.Lee]

This has a very soft romantic quality to it. Very beautifully written, as usual.

[Brokensoul]

Its beautiful....I feel like i am floating in the air after reading it .lovely!

[Nirmala]

Amazing compliment to the loved one! Love is in every line building up to the end and it is so gentle and so demanding of silence that will not disturb the presence of the woman adored. Very touching in its tribute!

[cest la vie]

I am still trying to catch my breath.. Just beautiful...

[Ebs]

So beautifully written. The imagery was breathtaking. Thank you for entering the 'Someone special' Contest.

Ebs

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very beautiful, well written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah