Jade staircase...

Walk the jade staircase...

 

 

Dreams of plastic butterflies

Of paper skies

Of fleeting cries…

 

Drops of sunlight coming in

Like honey on your skin

Caressed within…

 

Dresses of silk; ribbons of gold

Visions to hold

Passions untold…

 

Jade staircase formed by waves

A love it craves

A life it saves …

 

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Wow. I absolutely love the first stanza. The words flow beautifully and I can picture such things actually happening. Super beautiful write :)

[MagiCrystal]

Dreams of plastic butterflies

Of paper skies

Of fleeting cries� I can hear those words inside my soul... and I must say..
I'll wait eternity to see this in my life... amen

[just is]

Dreams of plastic butterflies
Of paper skies
Of fleeting cries�

I love these lines right here,
Plastic butterfly wonderful word used.
This is such a wonderful and beautiful write.
Like this alot.

[~angelalala~]

this is a beautiful write. you always have such a way with words. the imagery in this one is amazing, wonderful read. going in my favorites.

[Wildfleour]

Magnificent. As you can see from my icon, I love butterflies.

Certain words are so delicious - silk, gold, honey, caress, passion, sunlight.............creates very lovely imagery.

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In its simplicity you have created beautiful imagery in so few words. The form and flow is smooth. This only proves that poetry doesn't need to be complex in order to be understood and remembered. Nicely penned.

[Adeline]

This is really cool and really descriptive. Nice write, keep it up! :)

[Charlène Boutin]

Oh, the images pulled from my mind when I read these words are so vivid are so incredible and strong! Once again you manage to create a complete world of wonders with only a few words. It flows softly and feels like tasting a sip of eternal beauty... Very well done, my friend.