Tu sei una stella...la mia stella...

 

 

M y mind, how it longs for flight

Y our laughter is so pure and bright

B e my laughter on this night…

 

M y soul, it reaches for the skies

Y our gaze can melt my sad disguise

T onight may you be my eyes…

 

P ainted across night’s canvass far

I  long to see the radiant one you are

T onight, you are a star… my star...

 

Author's Note

Tu sei una stella...la mia stella...(Italian for "You are a star...my star...")

Reviews

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Oh mio!!!

Amo questo. Nessune parole possono descrivere suo colpisce su me...

Bello, appena assolutamente bello!

You my dear friend have made my day. I will for sure be saving this poem for life. It means a lot to me. :]

Gosh, I just love it.

Per sempre,
-Aurelia Mirella ♥

[Jetta Zippora]

How beautiful! Awesome write!

[Gema]

Wow bit of italian ah?
I love it again to do with love which ha ha i love =)
It is beautiful describing true and young love =)
Well done xxx

[Charlène Boutin]

Italian seems to be such a beautiful language... and so is your poem. It flows sweetly with emotion that feels light... almost fluffy... it sure lifted up my feelings when I read it!

[Velveteen Rabbit]

Ah, so romantic and delicate. I love the Italian title!

[Wildfleour]

Sweet, romantic........lovely, as always.



canvass.....canvas

[Anna Writes]

very beautiful...:)

[nostal]

I loved it.

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Awe thats a very sweet poem for your La Mia Stella!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are a true romantic my friend, such sweet words of admiration... simple beautiful work.

[Seriana]

Que Bellissimo!!! Craig, this is verra lovely. :) Like a kiss, blown on the wind. A beautiful sentiment for love. And the stars, they do shine bright upon thee, dear one. Such a beautiful breath, exhaled from your mind to ours. :)