Tu sei una stella...la mia stella...

 

 

M y mind, how it longs for flight

Y our laughter is so pure and bright

B e my laughter on this night…

 

M y soul, it reaches for the skies

Y our gaze can melt my sad disguise

T onight may you be my eyes…

 

P ainted across night’s canvass far

I  long to see the radiant one you are

T onight, you are a star… my star...

 

Author's Note

Tu sei una stella...la mia stella...(Italian for "You are a star...my star...")

Reviews

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Oh mio!!!

Amo questo. Nessune parole possono descrivere suo colpisce su me...

Bello, appena assolutamente bello!

You my dear friend have made my day. I will for sure be saving this poem for life. It means a lot to me. :]

Gosh, I just love it.

Per sempre,
-Aurelia Mirella ♥

[DrumMajorPod]

This is so beautiful! I love it. It's shorter than I would like, but it does an excellent job of painting strong emotions that anyone who has loved can understand. I particularly love the line "your gaze can melt my sad disguise." Just beautiful!

[Victoria Chang]

Well, this is beautifully expressed! This could definintely MELT any woman! hahaha! thanks for sharing!

[Enthusiast]

Caro Craig,

Amo questa poesia. � bellissima!

Keep up the great work!

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

I really love the very last line. It seems to hit home so well that it almost doesn't make sense to me as why it is so perfect. This is a beautiful poem. I love the style you used. I really enjoy the easy flow and understanding of it. I also enjoy that the rhymm does not effect your word choice, or if it does, it does not feel forced just because of it. I hope that made sense to you.

Happy writing.

[Wildfleour]

You are such a romantic! :)

[Gandré]

oh another poem with dripping love. Wonderfully painted. I hope you win the conquest. I adored this poem.

[The DuchessPoet]

Grazie per entrare nel mio concorso!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This was another great poem Craig! I love the title, It's so so so sexy... Sorry, italian is just amazing when you hear a man talk it it's just amazing okay back to the review lol. It flowed quite well and made me want to gaze into the stars with Jack (sorry, Nightmare before christmas is on my mind right now.) The feeling was very romantic. Great Job!

[J.Black]

mmmm Italian! So romantic, the language of beauty . . .

Lei � un bello scrittore!


"Painted across night's canvass far

I long to see the radiant one you are

Tonight, you are a star� my star..."