Sapphire blue

 

 

You are a pool so sapphire blue

Refreshing water, fresh and new

Your eyes, a deeply crystal hue…

 

In your azure beauty I’m undone

Your smile is like the rising sun

A sheltering current just begun…

 

Let my enchanted life begin

Let me come and drown within

Your soft and sacred skin...

 

Reviews

[Jessica M.]

very romantic.
sapphire blue,
my favorite stone,
a very rich color.
a good color to be,
nice write.

[Velveteen Rabbit]

This makes me want to lean back in my chair, close my eyes, and sigh with a refreshing "ahh." (^__^) Beautiful imagery here: the color of sapphire and the idea of a sacred shelter in the presence and love of the woman this is written for--so romantic!
"In your azure beauty I'm undone"--That's my favorite line. It's so powerful!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are a true romantic my friend, your words are so mesmerizing, soft and sweet... I am sure the woman who this is for melted when she read it.

[Seriana]

Ahhh, a journey on the wind, and I can feel all the shades of blue around! This is lovely Craig! Beautiful words from a beautiful soul. :)

[emmajoy]

Beautiful words, lilting lines, fine construction.. what more could a reader ask.

Thank you for sharing, yet again. :-)

[Charlène Boutin]

Such beautiful words arranged in such a gorgeous manner! Very creative, refreshing, and inspiring.