Intoxicating...

Oh, you are...

 

 

I took a drink of your olive eyes,

And staggered at your gaze.

I nibbled on your soft lips;

Cream over crimson, so sweet.

We danced in your delicate fragrance;

I couldn’t stop from spinning.

Breathless, my ears drank in your voice

And angels paused to hear you speak.

I take another drink of your olive eyes.

You are so very intoxicating...

 

Reviews

[Lee E. Powell]

This was very romantic. The first line was just awesome!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A succinct and loving write. Just beautiful. Truly intoxicating.
Light,
Siddartha

[Seriana]

So this is a bit different for you Craig. :) Drinking down the intoxicating lure of another. And again, you've penned this with such a delicate beauty, as always. I really enjoyed it. :)

[CLUTZ]

VERY NICE! It's B-E-A-UTIFUL. i would have put dashes b-tween all of the letters but I'm a bit lazy. sorry. but i do like this.

[emmajoy]

She's a lucky woman! What beautiful words and, how finely written.

Not saying more, no need.

Thank you for sharing.

[R. L. Ambar]

Very good, an expression of love and overwhelming compassion.

#_#

Rocher

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very romantic my friend it shows just how intoxicating that special person can be and what is better then to be drunk on love... it's the hangover that hurts.

[~angelalala~]

this is beautiful. flows smooth as silk. short but the wording is perfect and powerful. makes us all want to find someone to be intoxicated with. well done.

[John Stussy]

This poem is as intoxicating as the way you present this woman Craig. She ought to be very proud to have this written for her. Have I mentioned how well you capture whatever you write about? Despite the short length of your poems you capture immense scenes. Excellently written man!