From calming gentle lapping to throwing its fury at us, like it's Samuel L Jackson having a hissy fit, the oceans give us so much as an aid to memory and contemplation, and that's before even mentioning all the tasty swimmy things for sustenance too!
I almost heard waves gently lapping as I read your words, but then the wind picked up and next thing, symbols crashing and it all went a bit classical furyesque and I had to go lie down! 😃
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
So greatly appreciated your vision as you read my words... yes, the ocean has so much personality!
I can feel some gloom and sadness within part of this, but then again I can feel a sense of peace as well. This is wonderful? I can hear your write come through with the right punctuation marks as well,
Kudos on an amazing write,
There's such an ache I felt reading this...an ocean is one place where everything feels right again, everything seems aligned & in order. Yet, there's so much chaos beneath the surface which a rare amount of us can begin to comprehend. It shows us what it wants us to see, just like an iceberg...so much hidden underneath, down into its dark abyss.
Hummm...I have often said "I am the ocean". No idea where that came from but it reminds me, this. On the edge of the earth, that line between sand and water? The never coming back...They are loved, dearly.
From calming gentle lapping to throwing its fury at us, like it's Samuel L Jackson having a hissy fit, the oceans give us so much as an aid to memory and contemplation, and that's before even mentioning all the tasty swimmy things for sustenance too!
I almost heard waves gently lapping as I read your words, but then the wind picked up and next thing, symbols crashing and it all went a bit classical furyesque and I had to go lie down! 😃
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
So greatly appreciated your vision as you read my words... yes, the ocean has so much personality!
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..