Like amber fire...

Like amber fire...

A Poem by An owl on the moon
"

You are all I see, my love...

"

 

Scarlet streaks race in sapphire skies

And all I see are your stunning eyes…

Ashen clouds scatter rain on this space

In this crystal world I see only your face…

Wind rhymes and rifts on worlds within

But all I caress is your soft skin…

The day begins with fierce flame in the skies

Like amber fire, you are my sunrise...

 

© 2009 An owl on the moon


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Loved the rhyme scheme in this one. The loving thoughts are enchanting...ultra romantic! Wonderful imagery. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

9 Years Ago

Thank you, dear Lydia! Sometimes words of sweetness can flow from the bitterest dark spaces...
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Being so consumed by a lover
I know the feeling
Like no one in this world exists but that one man

Lovely

Posted 9 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

9 Years Ago

Yes, and that is such an extravagant existence... if only for moments. So glad you know the depth of.. read more
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9 Years Ago

IT has been quite a gorgeous one
An owl on the moon

9 Years Ago

How perfect! So very thankful for your shining world. :)
Beautiful..............what a gift for someone to receive such a poem, so passionate, so tender.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The day begins with fierce flame in the skies
Like amber fire, you are my sunrise...


The ending to this short piece sums it up quite nicely~

A love so pure in essence to be compared to the sunrise
how poetic and beauiful in verse~As always I stand in awe
of your talent with words~

Thanks for sharing in the Fire/Ice contest



Posted 15 Years Ago


There is not much to add, everyone pretty much said it all.

It's a beautiful poem about a love that is so pure and so strong...

It makes me jealous. Haha

Amazing job. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sensual without being crude. Just lovely.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Once again you have captured the essence of Love's Beauty with a brilliant display of color and cadence.
All to true, as we sit with in our mirrored world, a crystal shard reflecting our deepest emotions; We remember. Memories of love's bright light that would dance across our heavens, playing with our emotions and leading us to our own EDEN.
Yet, trapped we are. As we can only look, it's our memories that touch.

A wonderful work of art here. I can envision it painted in colors grand on a canvas.

Aaron Maycroft

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love the way you express your love through your mind and your eyes like explaining a sound to a deaf person so descriptive and i can feel each emotion as you say each word.
Like a sound you listen to and relax with eyes closed well done x

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow someones in love.....and isn't it grand. lovely write

Posted 16 Years Ago



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