Careless Days Drifting

Careless days drifting... An attempt at creating the feel of an abstract painting utilizing words from a dreamer's dictionary.

Reviews

[Seriana]

Your words always have a dream-like quality to them, pulling one in on the edge of awake for yet a small price more. The artistry of word vs. form and color are a perfect dichotomy of reality and life. It is a blend of many things, Craig. Those which are real or imagined. And I can seen them all clearly, even with my eyes shut.

Nicely done. Come back soon!

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, so grateful you stopped over! Thank you for your kindness! And as for that dreamy quality... it may be because I'm always half asleep. 😁Wishing you such endless hope and joy now. 🤗

[Samuel Dickens]

Oh, my, how a poet will spin words of sun and rain and fruit to portray his feelings for another kind of fruit, that being the apple of his eye. Dreamy and delicious, my friend.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Love how the words come together it's truly a work of art as one reads,thank you for sharing.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Mauricio! Hope your week is treating you well.

[June bug]

I just loved your opening stanza, as I was reading on downward with this write, I found it so wonderfully written. This is one lovely read. Once again love the background, it fits in with your write. Very lovely write.

[Stella Armour]

How utterly beautiful,
verse 4 is just so lovely and gently sensuous

[Ken Simm.]

Beautiful is the word. Accompanied perhaps with warm and dreamlike.

[Kim S.]

This is a really beautiful write here, your background color reminds me of fall.
enjoyed your write

[Cherrie]

This poem caresses the fine air of a mountain morning.

[An owl on the moon]

So grateful for your kindness... for feeling the words flowing across your mountain morning. 🌞

[emmajoygreen]

From start to finish, incredibly whispered phrases - their meaning and colour superb. Set with true artistic flair. Craig. Many thanks for sharing this with readers who can - when ready, sit back, close eyes, think, dream and understand just that little more.. .

[An owl on the moon]

Always grateful for your presence here, Emma. You have been pausing on my pages for... oh my... at least 15 years? Wishing you so much wonder as your autumn world awakens around you there across the sea.

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks for you wishes, Owl.. and hoping life runs smoothly now and again - even more when possible.

[Lorry]

Your words here Craig are just like the thought of a sun filled day, with beauty on your mind and the feeling of what will be will be emanating from it.
I think your picture in the background and the colour used show the warmth of your thoughts and words in a very abstract way, not too clear, but easily imagined as to what it could be.
That colour does match your words and the feeling of the warmth of your words.
Lorry.

[An owl on the moon]

Lorry, thank you for your continual encouragement over these years. I so hope you are having a warm, wondrous day right now in your world!